Music, the ancient language...
Group: Musicians
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Posted: June 19 2003, 14:07 |
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Hmm... you let out some flange on it there in the background at the end. Needless to say I'm confused and baffled again. 
Nice little variation you do on the main theme you do there. Not bad.
You haven't made any serious 'sins' (I don't want to play a priest or guru, it's just an easy word to use) in the track, not with your sound and not with your harmony. I can point out some little sins, though. You put quite some reverb on the main theme. I agree it sounds ok, but you have to be careful the other instruments you use aren't gonna sound to naked. The 'guitary' sound you introduce at 00:47 and the 'organy' sound at 01:13 push the limit, I think. I feel it sucks some power out of the main theme. I imagine them with some reverb themselves, or maybe the guitar with an little melodical theme. Or the two interacting with eachother, instead of sample them over almost each measure. Just some thoughts.
The whole piece on it's own gives me a feel of "Booster doing Sentinel". You seem to simply play around with the parts of Sentinel, instead of putting your feelings into it. Hmm... that might be because I don't get you style? Maybe, but I think it really lacks building up. It's just like 'Sentinel with not much going on'.
But again, no big sins. I think now it's time to focus more on how to put your ideas (which you clearly have and I even like some! ) together in a continuous, flowing composition.
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