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Posted: Oct. 25 2006, 11:57
The track is called töttöröö and you can comment on it if you like. this is my last attempt in trying to get feedback, good or bad is great.
http://www.mikseri.net/artists/harmono.59041.php
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Posted: Oct. 25 2006, 16:59
Ooooops I did it again :/
This belongs in the fan music place, its no remix.
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Posted: Oct. 25 2006, 18:27
What? It's not a Britney cover?  :D

A little too simple in the mix for my tastes, but a nice theme and melody. By the 3rd minute I was wondering where it was going. I've said before that I'm not a musician, so I don't have the technical knowledge  or vocabulary to make my comments sensible, and I admire anyone who's prepared to put there music here for us. I suppose what this needs to my ears, is a change of key upwards at some point, or a change of tempo, to give it a sense of movement. The last bar should be nearer the middle and take it onwards from there. Does that make sense?

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Posted: Oct. 26 2006, 17:14
I think the choise of instruments is rather electronic and would be better if there were some real sounding ones - some nice melodies occasionaly in the back ground but a bit kind of dischordant sound to it in general.

Still probably simmilart to my own attempts which I darnt share with anyone.

Ray  :D

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Posted: Oct. 27 2006, 09:11
nice and constructive feedback, I thank you.
As my artistpage says I don't know much about all the knobs and tech in general. I hope to get better in time and maybe with some real instruments, at least guitar and percussion.  :)
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