Music, the ancient language...
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Posted: June 20 2003, 16:53 |
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| Quote | | think there is difficult to develop it more... |
Agree. You've alright pretty much developed it. It's just that it would be nice for a longer track, with more themes involved. But even when it stands on it's own, I agree it deserves some more quality.
| Quote | | this is a piece on it's own |
Then I'd like to add some comments. Your intro is quite risky. Not all notes go together nice. This style works very good when the guitar comes in, but maybe you should consider not to put to much contrast (in a harmonic way) in your melody in the beginning.
But what concerns me more, is your ending. Again you give me the impression you wanted to get rid of the ending quickly. Just letting the other instruments fade seems a bit cheap. You could do better with the ending.
Anyway, I hope you find good hardware, en remake this track. It kicks ass! 
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