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Posted: Mar. 09 2005, 20:17

Hi folks
I've been working on a new track tonight. It's just a beginning, but anyways, I'd like to have your comments about it

http://waves.akaneko.com/akane/aero1.mp3

thanks in advance =)


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Posted: Mar. 09 2005, 20:31

Very nice, I listened to it twice. Can't wait to hear the finished piece. Perhaps needs a little more elaborate drum work to add some oomph, but I'm not a musician so what would I know. Good Luck.

Tracy.


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Posted: Mar. 09 2005, 21:44

I like it too, it has nice atmosphere. Good luck for carrying-on!

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Posted: Mar. 10 2005, 00:40

Starting song now

more drums, mabye an acustic piano doing some chord workin the back.

lets see.........still listening...............Like the guitar............. needs those chords still.............. I think i hear a rythym guitar............. mabye louder rythym........song just ended..... damn it needed those chords.

Besides that Very Good!
Love The guitar!!

Sorry for being so critical!!


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Posted: Mar. 10 2005, 03:03

very good track
I only wish the harmony would change to the B part sooner and let the b Part last longer.
Technical Ideas - I would gain Bass, lower the guita solo sound although it is great.
Very good playing and general production sound.
Good luck. :)

finish it soon
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Posted: Mar. 10 2005, 04:20

thanks all for comments, and for being critical too =) there is no pb, I need those advices too =)

I will add more drums, with different patterns, and was thinking of changing the B and the way it arrives

thx all


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Posted: Mar. 10 2005, 11:14

Incredible, Can't wait to hear the final result!
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Posted: Mar. 10 2005, 11:15

thank you =)

you all give me strength to keep on working


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Posted: Mar. 10 2005, 12:51

The guitar is just great :)

I have actually not more remarks since everything's been said already...

can't wait to hear final version ;)


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Posted: Mar. 10 2005, 18:35

Nice work! Not the usual kind of tune you hear everyday. I love it!

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Posted: Mar. 11 2005, 17:52

Nice work indeed, Akane - congratulations and keep on the good work. However, I'd like to ask you a favour: please change the title. :) I'm way too fond of the Jean Michel Jarre album titled Aero to mentally associate it with a very Oldfieldian tune as this. And of course I absolutely don't want to make the association, so please try not to give me an excuse to do it. :D :D

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Posted: Mar. 14 2005, 03:29

hihihihi

that was just a temp title actually ;)


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Posted: April 09 2005, 09:31

Hi

We thought that was very good, you have your own style, and we absolutely love the guitars very nice :-)

Sue and Paul Harrison


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